i wanted to start a blog where i could share poems/stories i've written with my friends and classmates, and with anyone else who's interested. please comment!
You use simple words and phrases, the cliches of romance, twisting them slightly in mistrust of their obvious associations. However, you should use fewer words in general and occassionally misplace a strange, higher-level place.
sunday i drink red win and build you shrines think up lines
i keep cross around my neck and you smoke cigarettes i have regrets
You use simple words and phrases, the cliches of romance, twisting them slightly in mistrust of their obvious associations. However, you should use fewer words in general and occassionally misplace a strange, higher-level place.
ReplyDeletesunday i drink red win
and build you shrines
think up lines
i keep cross around my neck
and you smoke cigarettes
i have regrets